Thursday, November 5, 2009

hw 20 big paper 1 revised draft

How has the digital obsession altered our ability to interact causing out sense of individuality to decline?

The digital age although new and fairly recent has quickly changed the way we live like nothing else in recent memory. So many aspects of our life have been influenced by electronics. All types of information seem to be thrown at us constantly. The new digital age, which we identify with the most, started when the television was mass-produced. Although that was the beginning, the digital mediums of the 40’s are nothing like the digital mediums of today. The television was used mostly as a means of obtaining information such as the news and current events and gradually turned to a method of entertainment (I Love Lucy in the 60’s and texting and American Idol in the new millennium.) To put it simply there are so many digital mediums they have caused us to re-think interaction between one-another and what it means to think impartially. The digital age has created a new form of communication, which has reduced face-to-face embodied communication and replaced it with electronic mediums; this is changing our ability to lead an individual life of free thought.

The Internet is arguably the biggest change in our way of life as a result of the digital revolution. Its many aspects play multiple roles in obtaining information. One of the biggest portions of the Internet is the self – publishing side. Blogs, movie reviews, and personal thoughts (aka comments) blanket the web like no other type of entertainment could. Why send a letter to the editor when you can comment on the website. In the book Everything good is Bad For You the author Steven Johnson states: “The wonderful blog-tracking service technorati reports that roughly 275,000 blog entries are published in the average day - a tiny fraction of them authored by professional writers.” (Johnson 119) This statistic shows how frequent blogs are posted, and read, and thought about, and replied, and forwarded. If you were to look at any random post there is a high probability that it will be based on the person who wrote it, whether its what they are feeling about work, what they think about sports, or politics, or movies. The underlying principle of the post is self-involvement. The blogs are providing new channels for social interaction. At first glance this seems like a positive and in many ways it is but there is also a negative side. The constant blogging, followed by the comments, then the replies all happens so fast that within minutes your idea thoughts and opinions are seen by tons of people and your original thought about life is now the thoughts of others and your ability to keep your thoughts and be an individual are wiped away with the click of a mouse. The blog is the online diary, except on the blog there is no hiding place.

The blog isn’t the only way the Internet has changed or interaction habits. Search engines have also tarnished our thought process. Many, most of whom are teenagers, have all the information in the world at their finger tips and see no need to learn more the minimum necessary or have intelligent conversations instead they use the easy way, the method that requires less work, they rely on Wikipedia, and Google to gain knowledge only when necessary. “Google is our culture’s principle way of knowing about itself.” (Johnson 121) For today’s youth the digital age primarily the internet has given them an excuse to never educate themselves unless necessary. This change from intelligent and purposeful conversation to the opposite has been partly caused by the television and Internet together. The T.V. distracted and caused people to zone out and the Internet gave them a place to get anything they needed 24/7. This has stopped people from having interactions about what really matters, and moved it to conversations based on sitcoms and reality shows.

Social networking sites are another way the Internet has changed the way we interact. They help shape the new interaction style different from all else. According to the facebook website there are about 300,000,000 active users. ("Facebook.com") This is only around 4 million less than the population of the entire United States. Social networking has helped form the new method of interaction. It helps connect friends and family like nothing in the past could. Social networking has gone as far as redefining the word friend. Being a facebook friend doesn’t meet the same requirements of a real life friend, to change the definition of the word friend is quite a feat. Face Book like the blog has opened a new pathway of interaction. Social networking is seen as the change from having a conversation with a friend on the phone or in a restaurant to looking at the pictures of someone you hardly know. And with more than 2 billion photos uploaded every month ("Facebook.com") the change isn’t difficult to miss. Social networking sites have worked to appease the demand of haveing information immediately. This is Further making it harder to think about something objectively with no background information or individual opinion.

Nearly all the digital mediums in this age have an aspect of constant contact but nothing has matched the cell phone’s ability to connect people from every corner of the world. “Nothing has matched the seismic cultural shift created by the cell phone” (Kim.) The cell phone has revolutionized the human idea of connection. It has given us the opportunity to talk to anyone anytime. The cell phone has given people the opportunity to interact and connect and be hundreds of miles away. One example of the obsession of constant contact is a table adapted from the neilson group telecom by “fuor digital”. It shows that 88% of wireless subscribers in Russia have used text messaging within the last 30 days of the survey. ("fuor digital, digital media specialists ") This statistic does a good job of illuminating how many people use texts and cell phones to connect and interact with friends, family, and co-workers. The constant use of cell phones and texting has altered what is normal talk. What used to be a human connection is replaced with a piece of technology. We have become so immersed in our digital lives, the text, and calls, and screen that we stop thinking about what is around us, what we should be focusing on is brushed to the side by the digital mediums.

Cell phones obviously connect people through their personal lives but they also connect business. Thousands of people rely on cell phones to work. This is both advantageous and disadvantageous, in one sense industries have thrived because of the availability to send information at any moment, but at the same time people lose their ability to disconnect, to be alone. When I was interviewing people on their thoughts of digitalization one man made the point that we are always reachable: “Everyone expects that your available 24/7, which means you have an urgency in responding, people aren’t thinking, they are not acting appropriately in many respects.” This is an excellent point cell phones have allowed work to never cease. How many people claim they cant live without their phones? The explosion of digital media has changed proper interaction, people now use technology to work even when they are away. Everyone is reachable all the time thus preventing people from leading a solely individual life, having one life based on work, and the other on personal life. The constant connection is preventing people from being truly alone.

Another one of the negative implications of the digital age is that we use the connection set by the Internet and cell phones even when it is not necessary, to often we Google something because it is easier. We get the raw information using the fastest way we know how. We use the technology because we are addicted and it’s appealing. An example of using the technology when not necessary is in the book Feed by M.T. Anderson: “we were to angry to speak out loud our jaws were like grrrrrvvvvv. So we started to chat” (Anderson 167). Even though they were sitting right next to each other with no one else around them they used the technology. They didn’t need to use it, they could have just spoken and gotten the same outcome but they didn’t because the feed was more attractive, it was marketed better. The addiction to digital representation devices has altered our sense of interaction as shown in Feed instead of speaking as individuals to each other, they used the Feed as a third party.

Another example of using digital representational devices when not necessary is from the film “Wall-E” in the film two men are using a screen to interact even though they are right next to each other. This is another example of how the digital mediums have changed our ideas of interaction so much that we don’t even think about not using them, it has become second nature. They have become the central point of interaction. They are so prevalent in our society that our thoughts are no longer just thoughts; they are represented by digital devices.

This idea that we are losing our ability to think freely is extremely important. What kind of world is it if one cant be an individual and you have to rely to everything and everyone else? People spend so much time on the Internet and watching television they are constantly being shaped and formed by the ideas of those who write it. There are so many instances where the digital age is immensely good for society but sometimes you can have too much of a good thing. This also has an effect on a jury, how can you get a fair and impartial jury of your peers if all the information and opinions of others are already plastered on the Internet. Yes it is giving us information but too much of it is useless.

On the contrary what’s good about the boom of digital representational devices and the idea that the digital age is destroying our ability to think and interact is that digital devices are just the latest version of human interaction. Did people say the telegram was destroying interaction, or the smoke stack? No they just made life easier, they were just the examples of human ingenuity. History is merely repeating itself, just in a different version. As people develop so do the inventions created for them. Technology is simply adapting to the wants and needs of the population. Digital mediums are helping people get what they need and want faster, easier, and more efficiently. It is a valid argument, one that many overlook. It is just change, and change is always somewhat scary. The digital age is more worrisome because it was immediate, not gradual like other innovations before it.

These changes are seen just about everywhere. Pretty much all of the modern world, especially the western world, is having the same affect as a result to the digital obsession. The lack of face-to-face embodied communication is gradually lowering the need for individuality all over the world. I see it occasionally in my life, for example I can recall last year instead of reading notes from the text book I wrote down the question and decided to Google it later. However this is just the human way of thinking, to find something new, adapt to the change environment it has caused, obsess, and eventually it will change.

The new form of digital interaction has relied too heavily on electronic methods instead of a human communication lowering our ability to lead an individual life.

WORKS CITED

· johnson, steven. Everything Bad Is Good For You. New York: Riverhead books, 2005. 119. Print.

· Johnson, Steven. Everything Bad Is Good For You. New York: Riverhead books, 2005. 121. Print.

· "press room, statistics, general growth." Facebook.com. facebook, Web. 3 Nov 2009. .

· "press room, statistics, applications." Facebook.com. facebook, Web. 3 Nov 2009. .

· "Text-messaging overtakes monthly phone calls." fuor digital, digital media specialists . 07/11/2008. four digital, Web. 3 Nov 2009. .

· Anderson, M.T. Feed. cambridge mass.: Candlewick press, 2002. 167. Print.

· Kim, Ryan. " The world's a cell-phone stage The device is upending social rules and creating a new culture." San Francisco Chronicle 27 Feb. 2006: n. pag. Web. 5 Nov 2009. .

5 comments:

  1. Evan,
    i think that you do have a good strong point to your essay here, i mean it is sound in its arguments. i just strongly disagree with your main argument being your main argument. I think that it is just a basic question. i know you are smart but i think that it really has no orgionality. I think that you could have done so much more. I mean look at your counter-argument. It has an origional idea and it is presented well. I am not saying to redo your paper but expand on that idea. If you just work with that idea you really have something. I never thought about smoke signals or telegrams like that. They are the same basic idea but yet we are getting up tight about the internet. There is so much potential yet you dont utilize it. I think that this paper has all it needs but i just dont see any origionlity too it. I mean thats what i was looking for its up to you though. what you have is strong but i think that it could be creative. Its up to you though

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  2. dear EVAN,
    you have a really goo d paper here. it has a good thesis and good ideas that support it. your sources are great and support everything your saying

    when your are arguing about the internet and blogging. you could mention how that decreases written literature, while people are blogging information less people continue to pay and read the newspaper.
    when you talked about social networking site i liked when you said "Social networking has gone as far as redefining the word friend. "

    to be continued....

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  3. My partners have not posted their papers so I decided to comment on someone who i normally wouldn't look at, no offense.

    Great paper, like reading a documentary film. Well organized, connections between the paragraphs are clear. It's not just one item to the next, you kind of hint on the previous then move on to make your point stronger. However also like a documentary sometimes it seems you're indifferent. Your thesis may not be the most exciting or the most controversial but your opinion is. So put that out in the paper, like your cell phones paragraph " The constant connection is preventing people from being truly alone." is that a good thing or a bad thing? More or less i think it lacks a "tie-back sentence" that would let the reader know how maybe "preventing people from being truly alone" makes "human communication lowering our ability to lead an individual life." Then we can all see clearly whether you're for or against such statements that seem indifferent.

    I would suggest a significance section, it's a key component that will draw the reader's attention as well as make your paper more controversial with an opinion despite your thesis. This could also help your thesis if you change it a little to include a significance part to make it more spiced up. Why should i care? Why should we all care about leading our own lives? Gives your paper a more arguable standpoint which makes it more interesting, and feels more like an actual exhibition.

    Also the key is consistency. Sometimes the paragraphs seem like they lack something compared to the other paragraphs. Try and keep the trend going; evidence, analysis, connection, then tie back. Sometimes it stops at connections, sometimes the analysis could have been better.

    Note:For any papers in this class, you should always make your paper controversial in some way. This paper was lacking the sense of an opinion, whether it was good or bad. There were traces of it but not enough to suffice, makes the reader read more interested even if they're against your opinion. They're like "oh man this guy is so wrong, let me see what other bullshit he's writing" and who knows maybe you're convince the opposing person.

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  4. to continue my comment
    i think this paper is great but there is no heart behind it
    my grades are
    POV: 2.5
    Evidence: 3
    Effective Organization: 3
    Connections and Significance: 4
    Opposing POV: 4
    Communication Written: 3
    Communication Performance: 3
    Total 22.5

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  5. i am sorry for not getting to complete my comment sooner.
    POV: 2.5
    Evidence: 3
    Effective Organization: 4
    Connections and Significance: 4
    Opposing POV: 3
    Communication Written: 3
    Communication Performance: 3.5
    total: 23

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